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==Names?==
==Names?==
Just a friendly suggestion; I started to read this article today and came across this part: "In March, They named Mibu Roshigumi. The Mibu Roshigumi was hired by Aizu han the Military Commissioner of Kyoto In August, they were dispatched for the Political change on August 18. Lord Matsudaira Katamori evaluated their job and gave them new name Shinsengumi." The first sentence is of unclear meaning. Also, this passage tells that the name of the group was changed, but it doesn't say why or even what either of the names mean. While this would be easy to discover using an online kanji dictionary, I think these things would be very helpful and convenient to most people. Thanks. [[User:Azuki Arai|Azuki Arai]] 10:03, 16 March 2007 (PDT)
Just a friendly suggestion; I started to read this article today and came across this part: "In March, They named Mibu Roshigumi. The Mibu Roshigumi was hired by Aizu han the Military Commissioner of Kyoto In August, they were dispatched for the Political change on August 18. Lord Matsudaira Katamori evaluated their job and gave them new name Shinsengumi." The first sentence is of unclear meaning. Also, this passage tells that the name of the group was changed, but it doesn't say why or even what either of the names mean. While this would be easy to discover using an online kanji dictionary, I think these things would be very helpful and convenient to most people. Thanks. [[User:Azuki Arai|Azuki Arai]] 10:03, 16 March 2007 (PDT)
:This article is still mostly Shikisoku's draft that needs to be edited. It does say right in what you included that "Lord Matsudaira Katamori evaluated their job and gave them new name Shinsengumi." - so the name was changed to Shinsengumi from "Mibu Roshigumi", the first sentence meant that they "(were) named Mibu Roshigumi". I'll try to edit this today if I get a chance. --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 15:41, 16 March 2007 (PDT)
