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SamuraiWiki talk:Shinsengumi Task Force (view source)
Revision as of 08:48, 1 February 2007
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The new article looks good - I think it needs to get one final reorganization - it seems to end where it starts, sort of circular (probably because of the leftovers from the original). Also needs to be broken up in to sub-sections for ease of use (Maybe "Background", "organization", "First assignment" etc.- I'm just throwing out random ideas), and I think adding in the list of members would give it the final fill out. --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 12:58, 31 January 2007 (PST)
The new article looks good - I think it needs to get one final reorganization - it seems to end where it starts, sort of circular (probably because of the leftovers from the original). Also needs to be broken up in to sub-sections for ease of use (Maybe "Background", "organization", "First assignment" etc.- I'm just throwing out random ideas), and I think adding in the list of members would give it the final fill out. --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 12:58, 31 January 2007 (PST)
I think Obenjo-san cared about me. You can modify the leftovers of original article to fit.--[[User:Shikisoku|Shikisoku]] 04:48, 1 February 2007 (PST)