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In the [[shinsengumi]] article it says: "Right after they arrived at Kyoto, Kiyokawa's conspiracy was revealed." - What was the conspiracy? Was Kiyokawa secretly against the Bakufu? I remember reading something about this, but I can't remember exactly what this was about.  --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 08:20, 31 January 2007 (PST)

In the [[shinsengumi]] article it says: "Right after they arrived at Kyoto, Kiyokawa's conspiracy was revealed." - What was the conspiracy? Was Kiyokawa secretly against the Bakufu? I remember reading something about this, but I can't remember exactly what this was about.  --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 08:20, 31 January 2007 (PST)

== [[Roshigumi]] Article ==

== [[Roshigumi]] Article ==

The new article looks good - I think it needs to get one final reorganization - it seems to end where it starts, sort of circular (probably because of the leftovers from the original).  Also needs to be broken up in to sub-sections for ease of use (Maybe "Background", "organization", "First assignment" etc.- I'm just throwing out random ideas), and I think adding in the list of members would give it the final fill out.  --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 12:58, 31 January 2007 (PST)

The new article looks good - I think it needs to get one final reorganization - it seems to end where it starts, sort of circular (probably because of the leftovers from the original).  Also needs to be broken up in to sub-sections for ease of use (Maybe "Background", "organization", "First assignment" etc.- I'm just throwing out random ideas), and I think adding in the list of members would give it the final fill out.  --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 12:58, 31 January 2007 (PST)