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Plans to edit sections 1-3 of the Shinsengumi page
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::Again, in this case, I was only referring to ''Okita Soji died of Tuberculosis just a month after Kondo's death''.  Nothing more!  (I brought up the Gregorian dates to show there were 2 months between Kondo's death and Okita's death.) [[User:Seven|Seven]] 20:32, 12 January 2007 (PST)
 
::Again, in this case, I was only referring to ''Okita Soji died of Tuberculosis just a month after Kondo's death''.  Nothing more!  (I brought up the Gregorian dates to show there were 2 months between Kondo's death and Okita's death.) [[User:Seven|Seven]] 20:32, 12 January 2007 (PST)
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== Plans to edit sections 1-3 of the Shinsengumi page ==
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All, on Saturday afternoon (Jan 28), while killing time at Narita before my flight, I plan to start editing sections 1-3 of the Shinsengumi page. My edits will not do anything to the excellent information that has been posted unless I find issue with anything. I intend to add a little stylistic flair to the prose. While my Obenjo persona clowns around quite a bit on the forum, I assure alll taht there will be a no-nonsense approach to my contributions as I view the SA Wiki as a serious academic under-taking that reflects on all of us.
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I plan to have my first round of edits completed on Sunday (Jan 29) as I will basically have a free day. If I do add any new factual data or make any edits to the excellent factual details that have already been posted, a list of these changes will be summarized in the change box.
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Please keep an eye on the Shinsengumi page and give me CONSTRUCTIVE feedback.
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Thanks,
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--[[User:Obenjo Kusanosuke|Obenjo Kusanosuke]] 05:54, 24 January 2007 (PST)