− | I have marked this as a draft because--in spite of the obvious multiple sources consulted--it resembles them too closely. It needs to be rewritten with less reliance on those sources and more research. The sentances are not cut-and-paste, but the vocab seems to be. Otherwise, great article [[User:Nagaeyari|Nagaeyari]] 14:27, 20 October 2006 (PDT) | + | I deleted my comment about rewriting so it doesn't sound like other sources, because I'm pretty sure the author of this article is one of the authors who had originally written it. If that's so, my comment was out of place. [[User:Nagaeyari|Nagaeyari]] 10:26, 23 November 2006 (PST) |