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Let's leave the dates as you edited them and to let Orson continue narrating... :D --[[User:Obenjo Kusanosuke|Obenjo Kusanosuke]] 22:25, 2 October 2007 (PDT)
 
Let's leave the dates as you edited them and to let Orson continue narrating... :D --[[User:Obenjo Kusanosuke|Obenjo Kusanosuke]] 22:25, 2 October 2007 (PDT)
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== Osaka Sieges ==
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The article is pretty heavy on the sieges - fine for the moment, but I think the bulk of it should be put into osaka campaign articles, or create a "Osaka Campaign" article for it, and thin this one out a bit, there is a lot of info here, more than necessary for the Sanada article, but great info for an osaka campaign article.  I think it should be done like the "[[Boshin War]]" article - one large general article, and then articles for specific battles and sieges. --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 04:16, 3 October 2007 (PDT)
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That's exactly what I intend to do... I was on a role with the Osaka siege details that relate to Sanada Yukimura and just wanted to get the details down pat. To do the complete Siege of Osaka article, I intend to borrow heavily from the Sanada article and thin it out in the process. I still have some considerable holes to fill regarding the summer siege i.e. Battle of Yao, Sakai, what happened after Yukimura dies, etc. I'll probably get to use some of those Osaka castle pics that I uploaded on the SA Wiki a while back.  I may try to get around to doing the article over the weekend ''if the weather is bad''. As it is a three-day holiday in Japan, I've got my fingers crossed for good weather. It was not so nice last weekend here in Tokyo. I want to get outside! Also, '''Kitsuno'''-- do you have one of those huge Sengoku dictionaries in Japanese? If so, would you kindly consider doing some articles on the folks in the Sanada article who have links but no articles? My original Yukimura article had all the kanji for their names-- and I noticed you put that to good use on some of the other bios. :) --[[User:Obenjo Kusanosuke|Obenjo Kusanosuke]] 22:28, 3 October 2007 (PDT)
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:I can, but I'm still moving over bios from the SBD first. So I've had to prioritize. --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 00:03, 4 October 2007 (PDT)
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== On documents ==
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Some edits seem to imply things the original documents did not say, so I changed them.
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About Fushimi, the order says they were to send 1680 men to help with the construction, but unless there is some other document, that does not sound like they "played leading roles."
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Ieyasu's letter does not say anything about "once the Western coalition was successfully defeated," so I tried to remove the phrase from the scope of "told Nobuyuki."--[[User:Bethetsu|Bethetsu]] 02:11, 5 October 2007 (PDT)
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Ok- no objections.--[[User:Obenjo Kusanosuke|Obenjo Kusanosuke]] 18:00, 5 October 2007 (PDT)

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