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==Too much opinion?==
 
==Too much opinion?==
 
:I read this article for the first time and it seems to express an opinion more than stating the facts, as [[User:LordAmeth]] pointed out.  A short essay may be appropriate as an opinion paper, but I'm not sure it is appropriate here.  Should we create a separate section for it (e.g. ==Arguments for Lord Kira==) or move the opinion to a more specific article?  Or should we just go in and remove the opinion as much as possible and just lay down the facts?--[[User:JLBadgley|JLBadgley]] 04:18, 2 December 2007 (PST)
 
:I read this article for the first time and it seems to express an opinion more than stating the facts, as [[User:LordAmeth]] pointed out.  A short essay may be appropriate as an opinion paper, but I'm not sure it is appropriate here.  Should we create a separate section for it (e.g. ==Arguments for Lord Kira==) or move the opinion to a more specific article?  Or should we just go in and remove the opinion as much as possible and just lay down the facts?--[[User:JLBadgley|JLBadgley]] 04:18, 2 December 2007 (PST)
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:It does back up its opinions with sources - I think it is fine as is, it could benefit from more straight facts. Otherwise, the entire thing would have to be written from complete scratch, and this added to a section of it.  --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 11:28, 2 December 2007 (PST)