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::Ah. I hadn't looked at the reference cited. Didn't realize it was copied from such a source, rather than being newly written. Thanks. [[User:LordAmeth|LordAmeth]] 19:21, 22 February 2008 (PST)

::Ah. I hadn't looked at the reference cited. Didn't realize it was copied from such a source, rather than being newly written. Thanks. [[User:LordAmeth|LordAmeth]] 19:21, 22 February 2008 (PST)

:Thanks Bethetsu, I hadn't had a chance to respond. On the few bios that I used this source on, I rewrote or removed sections that were ambiguous or too contemporary (or read like a hagiography), but I missed that line. I'll just take it out. --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 00:57, 23 February 2008 (PST)

:Thanks Bethetsu, I hadn't had a chance to respond. On the few bios that I used this source on, I rewrote or removed sections that were ambiguous or too contemporary (or read like a hagiography), but I missed that line. I'll just take it out.  

::Actually, on reading it again, the entire last paragraph was too contemporary and outdated to leave in, so I removed it.  --[[User:Shogun|Kitsuno]] 00:57, 23 February 2008 (PST)