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::That should work out fine.  I have unknowledgeable friends read over my papers as a first proofread to take care of any basic comprehension problems.  [[User:Msr.iaidoka|Msr.iaidoka]]  02:12, 25 November 2006 (EST)
 
::That should work out fine.  I have unknowledgeable friends read over my papers as a first proofread to take care of any basic comprehension problems.  [[User:Msr.iaidoka|Msr.iaidoka]]  02:12, 25 November 2006 (EST)
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:I added a brief 'history' section, based off of Karl Friday's "Legacies of the Sword".  I tried to keep it broad, not related to the actual founding of any given school, but talking about kenjutsu and schools in general. I am curious, however, whether or not we need the -do and -jutsu debate in that article (not sure where else we should put it--maybe a generic 'bujutsu' article?), but that can get fairly contentious.  Also, I disagree with the way kenjutsu and battojutsu are specifically called out.  Kenjutsu is technically ''all'' sword techniques.  ''Battojutsu'' and ''iaijutsu'' are, strictly speaking, subsets of ''kenjutsu''.  I usually liken it to the way a square is a rectangle but a rectangle is not necessarily a square.  My preference would be to describe battojutsu and iaijutsu as a separate articles.  Thoughts? [[User:JLBadgley|JLBadgley]] 06:58, 25 May 2007 (PDT)
    
== [[Yagyu Shingan Ryu]] ==
 
== [[Yagyu Shingan Ryu]] ==
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