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Kitsuno, why did you say this incorporates text from the SBD? I did not use SBD when I wrote the original article, and I don't see that Obenjo used it either.--[[User:Bethetsu|Bethetsu]] 06:03, 2 October 2007 (PDT)
 
Kitsuno, why did you say this incorporates text from the SBD? I did not use SBD when I wrote the original article, and I don't see that Obenjo used it either.--[[User:Bethetsu|Bethetsu]] 06:03, 2 October 2007 (PDT)
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I used the Suda Chikamitsu reference from the previous article which I thought was written by Bethetsu.(If I read the article history right). I didn't bother to double check the accuracy of this point as it also appeared in the SBD.
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Converting dates is not one of my strongest points, but something smelled fishy about Turnbull's conversion methodology that he stated at the beginning of his book. Therefore, I went back and checked all dates using Japanese sources and put them in the article, next to the Turnbull-given dates. I meant to put this issue here in the talk page but forgot! Thanks for bringing this up, Bethetsu!
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Regarding use of SBD text, I didn't use anything directly from it intentionally although there is similar wording about "collapsed onto his campstool" vs "collapsed on a camp stool".--[[User:Obenjo Kusanosuke|Obenjo Kusanosuke]] 15:28, 2 October 2007 (PDT)